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| DATE | 2004-11-25 |
| FROM | Ruben Safir Secretary NYLXS
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| SUBJECT | Re: [hangout] NYLXS Open House Flyers
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From owner-hangouts-destenys-at-mrbrklyn.com Thu Nov 25 21:07:05 2004 X-UIDL: AN1!!_mX"!TO""!m0-!! Received: from www2.mrbrklyn.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mrbrklyn.com (8.12.11/8.11.2/SuSE Linux 8.11.1-0.5) with ESMTP id iAQ275q3029491 for ; Thu, 25 Nov 2004 21:07:05 -0500 Received: (from mdom-at-localhost) by www2.mrbrklyn.com (8.12.11/8.12.3/Submit) id iAQ274VW029490 for hangouts-destenys; Thu, 25 Nov 2004 21:07:04 -0500 X-Authentication-Warning: www2.mrbrklyn.com: mdom set sender to owner-hangouts-at-www2.mrbrklyn.com using -f Received: from www2.mrbrklyn.com (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by mrbrklyn.com (8.12.11/8.11.2/SuSE Linux 8.11.1-0.5) with ESMTP id iAQ274Lc029485; Thu, 25 Nov 2004 21:07:04 -0500 Received: (from ruben-at-localhost) by www2.mrbrklyn.com (8.12.11/8.12.3/Submit) id iAQ273Dp029484; Thu, 25 Nov 2004 21:07:03 -0500 Date: Thu, 25 Nov 2004 21:07:03 -0500 From: Ruben Safir Secretary NYLXS To: Billy Cc: hangout-at-nylxs.com Subject: Re: [hangout] NYLXS Open House Flyers Message-ID: <20041126020703.GA29454-at-www2.mrbrklyn.com> References: <386AEEE1B7BAC34CB4DDF394C2349278D6E88B-at-w2cs-nyk02.gam.com> <41A57237.5000108-at-dadadada.net> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <41A57237.5000108-at-dadadada.net> User-Agent: Mutt/1.3.27i Sender: owner-hangouts-at-mrbrklyn.com Precedence: bulk Reply-To: Ruben Safir Secretary NYLXS List: New Yorker GNU Linux Scene Admin: To unsubscribe send unsubscribe name-at-domian.com in the body to hangout-request-at-www2.mrbrklyn.com X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.0.0 (2004-09-13) on www2.mrbrklyn.com X-Spam-Status: No, score=-5.9 required=4.0 tests=ALL_TRUSTED,BAYES_00 autolearn=ham version=3.0.0 X-Spam-Level: X-Keywords: X-UID: 39099 Status: RO Content-Length: 1618 Lines: 45
> Cut the paragraph about "saving the masses" and > "technology ignorant government". Especially lose > the "... and do not profit off of the money". > It's incorrect usage. Really, just get rid of the whole > paragraph, as it's redundant with the top paragraph anyway. > You shouldn't claim that the course "will take you through > Perl's underlying structure", because it will almost certainly > not. I'm a programmer, and _I_ don't know what that means, unless > it refers to Perlguts, which would be a pretty advanced CS class. > > > Final suggestion, I promise... > > Print little vertical fringes along the bottom (or the side) > with the URL or tel#, so that people can tear one off to > take with them. Make them small so there can be lots of them. > ____________________________
I agree with the Mayor of Red Hook.
Ruben
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